SENSE: Part TWO (installment #5)
Sense: Part II I write. Most often it goes unread, only a lucky few get to skim. This is a piece I've been working on for some time now--not sure if it will be a short story or much longer. I suppose it could be categorized as adolescent lit. It's a work in progress. Suggestions and constructive criticism are welcome. Working title- Sense Installment # 5 (continued from September 8th )
She is having sex with some guy everyone calls Mavroskoufi because he always wears a black cap. She had sex with him, but they’re not boyfriend-girlfriend. Now she is kissing the boy I dream about every night when I squirm in bed and get wet. I don’t know what it is like to let a boy touch me. At Litsa’s last party I danced with George to a Phil Collin’s song. Our hands were sweaty and we were real close. I could feel the keys in his front pocket. Now my Romeo is locking lips and I am still the punk who is checking the area out. I take drastic measures and lie. I take drastic measures and lie. I tap on the door and warn them that someone is coming, a teacher I think. I tell them to hurry up and get out, that I am leaving, that I will meet them by the basketball court. I stomp my feet, pretending to walk away, decreasing the volume of each step, slowly fading, my ear still affixed to the door. I hear a giggle. I swear it is a giggle. I wait for another noise, but silence. I pull on my tie from frustration. I want to leave and let them get in trouble. I want to run into the main office and tell the secretary I heard unusual noises coming from the bathroom next to the auditorium. I want to run around to the side of the school and peek into the window to see that all they are doing is talking or telling jokes.
She is having sex with some guy everyone calls Mavroskoufi because he always wears a black cap. She had sex with him, but they’re not boyfriend-girlfriend. Now she is kissing the boy I dream about every night when I squirm in bed and get wet. I don’t know what it is like to let a boy touch me. At Litsa’s last party I danced with George to a Phil Collin’s song. Our hands were sweaty and we were real close. I could feel the keys in his front pocket. Now my Romeo is locking lips and I am still the punk who is checking the area out. I take drastic measures and lie. I take drastic measures and lie. I tap on the door and warn them that someone is coming, a teacher I think. I tell them to hurry up and get out, that I am leaving, that I will meet them by the basketball court. I stomp my feet, pretending to walk away, decreasing the volume of each step, slowly fading, my ear still affixed to the door. I hear a giggle. I swear it is a giggle. I wait for another noise, but silence. I pull on my tie from frustration. I want to leave and let them get in trouble. I want to run into the main office and tell the secretary I heard unusual noises coming from the bathroom next to the auditorium. I want to run around to the side of the school and peek into the window to see that all they are doing is talking or telling jokes.

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