Tuesday, January 17, 2006

Sense Part Two (installment #10)

Sense: Part II I write. Most often it goes unread, only a lucky few get to skim. This is a piece I've been working on for some time now--not sure if it will be a short story or much longer. It's a work in progress. Suggestions and constructive criticism are welcome.
Working title- Sense Installment # 10 (continued from Jan.6th)

One person will spin, whomever it lands on has to answer a truth or do a dare of the “spinner”. We agree. We start out tame. Many truths. No ballsy people until the bottle lands on Marco. He asks for a dare. Louca dares him to kiss the ass of a guy of his choice. We erupt in laughter. “No he didn’t,” someone yells slapping his knee, amazed at the fierce dare. Marco debates in his head, does he do it to the guy he likes the most? That may seem a bit fruity. Does he kiss the ass of the guy he dislikes; that would not be cool. He stands up and grabs Louca, spins him around and smacks a kiss on his tight blue jeans. We laugh and applaud and ask for an encore. Marcos is beet red as Louca punches him in the arm cursing for being chosen. We all kid and tell him he’s got the nicest ass in the room. He takes a bow and flaunts in the attention. The bottle moves hands.

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